好的履歷真的很重要
我今天在ＧＵＭＴＲＥＥ上看到一篇求職廣告 我看了真的傻眼
最主要是他的履歷表格式 完完全全抄我放在網誌上的 請看以下
因為他都公開在網路上了 所以我貼上來應該也沒有隱私問題
原文在這邊
Address: Carine, WA
Date Listed: 19/07/2009
Dear Sir and Madam,
My name is Eunie. I am from Taiwan. I am 20-year-old. I come to Australia for working Holiday and I have been here for 11 days. I would like to become an open-minded and brave person so I come here to enrich my life. Also, I want to explore this beautiful country.
I will stay in Perth for more than six months so I can work for a long time. I work really hard in my past part-time jobs. I love working because I can learn many things at work. I have never been late before. I always wear the big smile with patience when dealing with the customer.
I am looking for the following jobs, waitperson, kitchenhand, farm job(I have WWOOF experience), barmaid, cleaning, housekeeping, dishwasher and so on.
Thanks for reading my cover letter. If you hire me, you will never feel regret. I will try my best to do my job. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Eunie
Tsai Wen-Ting (Eunie)
＊Personal detail :
Date of birth : 10/10/1988
Date of birth : 10/10/1988
Address: 3 Debden Place Carine WA
Contact Number: 0422628427
(If I don't pick up the phone, please Text me, I will call you back)
E-mail Address: mailto:uf1t@hotmail.com
Visa type and expire date: Working Holiday Visa and expire on June 29 , 2010
＊Job objective：
＊Work History/Past Job History/Working Experience：
- Organization/ Company/Industry : May Show shop
- Responsibilities/Job duty /Job Description
- : clerk (on weekends) serving customers, selling product and cleaning
- Period / Duration : January 2009-June 2009
- Leaving reason: I come to Australia on June 29
- Organization/ Company/Industry : Lohas Steakhouse
- Responsibilities/Job duty /Job Description
- : waitress/ table setting, serving the food and cleaning
- Period / Duration : June 2008
- Leaving reason: The steakhouse only need the short-term waitress to help them when during the summer vacation in Taiwan.
- Organization/ Company/Industry : The Westin Taipei Hotel
- Responsibilities/Job duty /Job Description
- : waitress in the banquet hall(on weekends)
- Period / Duration : June 2007
- Leaving reason: I move to a place where is far from the hotel.
＊Education
Chung Yuan Christian University, English department, September 2006-present
Ｃertificate:
GEPT-High Intermediate Level (a kind of Test just like TOEIC)
Languages:
English-fluent ,Chinese-fluent, Japanese-beginner, Taiwanese-fluent
＊Personal Qualities/Personality:
＊Personal Qualities/Personality:
Willing to learn, hardworking, easygoing, patient, big smile, punctual and responsible
Able to adapt quickly to new working environments.
Serving the customer with the best attitude.
＊Availability:
＊Availability:
July08, 2009
Everyday, from 7:30a.m to 9:00 p.m
Referees:
Tristy Fairfield (working for the government) Tel: 0411220704
Allen Chen (Minister in Perth)
看完他的我很汗顏 我覺得我好像在這一篇中 沒有講清楚讓我馬上又去改一些東西
在這裡我想講一下 我基本上只是提供大概格式 就算要抄也要稍微改一下吧!
比方說我放上星字號是說請一定要寫這個 為什麼在這個人的履歷表中還是一模一樣的出現
然後像側標題 ＊Work History/Past Job History/Working Experience：
你基本上是選其一阿！我以為大家會懂不用放三個
＊Job objective： 放了但是啥都沒寫是什麼意思阿！
這份履歷表就算抄了我的格式也是很失敗
然後他的推鑑人也只放一有連絡方式另一個根本沒有連絡方式也不用放了阿！
請大家告訴我是我沒介紹好 還是這個人根本太懶
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